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How to write headlines that electrify and tantalize customers

by Peter Geisheker, CEO, The Geisheker Group Marketing Company (920) 592-9595

Did you notice the title for this article? Of course you did and that is why you clicked to read this article. As legendary advertising guru David Ogilvy said in his book, Confessions of an Advertising Man, “The wickedest of all sins is to run an advertisement without a headline.”

Yes, it is true that the most important tool in print advertising is the headline, be it for a space advertisement, a website, a sales letter, a billboard, or a press release. Headlines are the difference between success and failure in advertising.

In print advertising, the headline is so important that it is considered to be 80% of the power of an ad. The reason for this is that five times as many people read a headline as read the body copy of an ad. Consider how you read a newspaper or a magazine. If you are like most people, you scan headlines and you only read the news stories and advertisements that have a headline that catches your attention and interest. That is why writing an attention grabbing headline is so vitally important in advertising.

So, how do you write a good headline?

Actually, it is not as hard as you think. In fact, decades of research has been done on advertisements to see which headlines generate the most leads and sales and here is a summary of what works.

1. Your headline should flag down readers who have a specific problem. For example, if you are selling cosmetics that help middle age women look younger, your headline should state that benefit. For example, “How women over 40 can look 10 years younger in 10 minutes with XYZ Cosmetics.”

2. There are two words that work like magic in headlines – “How to.” People are drawn to headlines that say “How To” like bees to honey. Why? People are curious and want to learn “how to” solve a problem. Therefore, always try to start your headline with the words “How to”.

3. If possible, use the words “FREE” and/or “New” in your headline. Both words are magnets that draw in readers to read your advertisement.

4. Make your headline sound like news. A great way to learn how to do this is to buy a newspaper and read the headlines, particularly the headlines on the cover page. People want news, so make your headline sounds like a news headline from a newspaper and people will want to read your ad. Words that suggest news are “New”, “Announcing”, and “A Major Breakthrough”.

5. Longer headlines sell more merchandise than short headlines. Try to make your headlines 6-12 words in length.

In summary, the headline is the most powerful tool in advertising. If you want to create successful advertising, become a master at writing attention grabbing headlines.

If you need help marketing your product or service, contact The Geisheker Group Marketing Company at (920) 592-9595 or email us.